I wish to write
about a feeling that's hard to describe
Don't know what i am doing,
Don' know where i am going
i am just heading
Heading towards
some unknown path,
just following
my stupid heart
Telling the world
That i don't understand
Among zillions of people
Where do I stand?
I am just moving ahead
Not caring about where I'll land
I wish to know myself
Want to know what lies in my head?
I hope one day all this ends
This confusion... this introspection...
Something which just began
The world around me just keeps moving
Something strange... keeps brewing
It gives me highs
It gives me lows
Now,
I have started to love the rocky paths in this ride...
There is a new pain... new challenge...In this stride towards a life...
A life...
That is hard to describe!
disputed mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletenw thats confusing..infact u urself seems to be confused..
ReplyDeleteblv me u r just on the rite path..so keep movin..and walkin..johnie walker..lolz
wats wrong wid u?
ReplyDeletem nt talkin abt d poem....its nice like always......though i dnt really like d end that much
hahaha i like this one d best :)
ReplyDelete@khushbu - u were rite... so i ve changed it
ReplyDeletethe end is contradcitroy to the emotions expressed in the former lines...
ReplyDeleteAnyways... gud one!
@aks - i wrote it in a v strange state of mind... now i think that ending is perfect
ReplyDeletenice post ...this ending is perfect now ...
ReplyDeleteSukhi - tuss chha gayi ho !
ReplyDelete@aks - thank u thank u
ReplyDeletesukkhi yaar... ki kitta... har baar itna dard bhara poem... chhoo ditta... sacchi!!
ReplyDeletegud ...confused thoughts ..but describing a lot!!!
ReplyDeleteperfect..but then u knw wat shld be next...
ReplyDeletegood one again..
ReplyDeletebut yaar bahut senti posts ho gaye.. introspection khatam karo.. try something different..
kya baat hai sukhi.. v.nice post..
ReplyDelete:)
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